1. My goal is to find a career that’s for me and that I’ll be happy with
by next semester. I want to be sure of this career so that I can start
taking the classes I need and just to start moving on. I don’t want to
waste anymore time wondering and just feeling like I’m going in
circles with what I want to do. I would like to work with kids and changing
lives. I want to be part of making a difference in this world. I know
there’s a whole lot of baby steps in between but that’s why I want to
figure out what career fits me so I could get on my way to dong big
things.
2. I know that it takes a lot of time, patience’s and dedication to get
anything good in life and that’s what I’m afraid of. I’m afraid of
getting intimated by all the work that comes with having a good future
and career and giving up. I know that giving up shouldn’t be a option
but I feel like all the pressure will build up to frustration and ill
end up going down that road. I think that once I figure out what
career s meant for me I’ll be a lot more motivated in getting this all
done.
3. Finding a career that fits me is really important to me because I
don’t want to end up graduating and not going anywhere or even giving
up and not finishing school. I don’t want a
job I want a career. I also feel that figuring out what I want to do
is important because I might be interested in other things and not
know until I start exploring. I don’t want to waste any more time.
Tomorrow isn’t a promise I want to take advantage of as much as I can
every day.
4. In order to get this goal going I have to start researching and
asking questions. I need to find people who have similar interest as I
do and see what we have in common. Maybe I’ll be interested in their
career choice and will finally be able to have target to focus on and
hit.
you have a lot of great ideas for your essay.you will need to work on giving more supporting details such as examples and make your topic sentences more stronger.
ReplyDelete1.your thesis is very clear it all in one statement.in your first para you can give examples on how you can figure out what career fits you best or you can give examples on how you can be motivated throughout the process on finding careers that fit you. in para 2 give a little bit more details to support your topic sentence. you see how you said i want to take advantage as much as you can. you can give more details or examples on how you going to take advantage. need to work on placing your grammar in the right place other than that you have a great essay just work on giving more details and examples..